Peter - Brainstorm

Maine River - Weight of the world.

Loss of someone

Reflection

Devastation

Haunted

heartbreak

death

Location:

The Sea

River

Lake

Blacked out room with one source of light (Pictorial lighting)

Street car park

Hospital bed

Graveyard 

Characters:

Band

Singer

drummer if we can find a drum kit

Bass

Player

Guitarist

Lighting:

Narrative

Natural

dim

night lighting

street lamps

Performance 

Pictorial lighting

Plot:

starts with band playing in a blacked out room, then cuts to a lone person walking along a beach, with a locket with a picture of a girl in it, throws it in to the sea, then walks off in to the distance.

then cuts back to the band playing. then to the boy and girl arguing, boy pushes girl and she gets hit by a car or hits her head on something that puts her in a coma, then back to the band playing, and on the lyric "I can't save you" the boy will be by the side of the girls hospital bed, as she dies's this will fit in nicely as the next lyric is "she set's like the sun, didn't wait long enough".

or in the same bit have the boy standing by the girls grave laying flowers down for her.